Saturday, January 21, 2006

stay on the bus

"we are over here"
put this gun to your head,
tenderly carefully,
relieve you of your
hellish choice
you will have to stay on the bus.
we watch and long,
remembering.
willing you on silently.
full stop.

5 Comments:

Blogger dumbbell said...

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23/1/06 5:57 PM  
Blogger Pareidolia said...

pity. it was a good comment , almost real. you know, this sad little song was from a dream i had from years before. I was travelling with everyone i knew in a bus. dead loved ones there too; i was asking them what i should do...begging for their wisdom i knew they must have learned, but they were mute and i could only see their eyes shining. i wanted to be with them but i also wanted to stay, to see how the story continued. then a man with a balaclava (not a baclava) and a gun leapt on board and stuck the gun to my head. kidnapped me. i was terrified but so relieved that the decision has been made. i had no choice but to remain. when i looked to the lovedead they were willing me on silently, expressionless...they had this eternal wisdom but could not, were unable to influence me in any way.

2/2/06 8:04 PM  
Blogger dumbbell said...

Oh dear... What an insightful dream. You dream really rather seriously. My dreams unfortunately are more like Dali paintings with nonsensical melting lanscapes and such. The story did resonate with me and I did make it fit my scenario at the moment and it helped. Thanks.

2/2/06 11:46 PM  
Blogger dumbbell said...

apologies for my cronic deleting. I should seek help :/

2/2/06 11:46 PM  
Blogger Zosja said...

my dreams are realistic. I should seek help for that. it's obscure. I dream about doing things that I normally do and upon awakening it's all a big misunderstanding. things turn out not to have been done. people refuse to remember when they talked to me about certain things until I myself remember I just dreamed it up

karaul

3/2/06 12:38 AM  

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